User talk:AvyuktOrai

November 2024

Hello, I'm Blablubbs. I wanted to let you know that I removed one or more external links you added to the main body of an article. Generally, any relevant external links should be listed in an "External links" section at the end of the article and meet the external links guidelines. Links within the body of an article should be internal wikilinks. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. --Blablubbs (talk) 12:40, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello I am AvyuktOrai Noted, with thanks AvyuktOrai (talk) 12:43, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'm AlphaBetaGamma. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Gujarat Anti-corruption Bureau, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 13:34, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am @AvyuktOrai, I have included the reliable citation. Thanks for pointing out the changes @AlphaBetaGamma. AvyuktOrai (talk) 13:44, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Related to Draft:Nadeem Jafri

In the draft you submitted, The content related to establishment of the supermarket is repeated 3 times in the article. I would suggest you to remove the unwanted repetition and make the article concise. Also, some claims do not seem to have sources, and I have mentioned them in the article. Try to find them! Happy editing! Warriorglance(talk to me) 14:31, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Noted with Thanks and pointing it out. AvyuktOrai (talk) 06:24, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nadeem Jafri (March 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Gheus was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Nadeem Jafri and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Gheus (talk) 14:26, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Moved draft

Hi, you had moved Draft:Nadeem Jafri into the wrong name space (Wikipedia:, which is the project space), so I moved it back to Draft:. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:30, 14 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the update, Really appreaicte it.

Could you help me to move it to the main namespace as now its follows for the necessary requirements. AvyuktOrai (talk) 13:53, 14 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding the above and your question on my User Talk page, you submitted your revised draft article for review just a couple of hours ago, so it is awaiting review, as per the message at the top of the Draft. When it is reviewed, if the reviewer considers it suitable, it will be moved into main space. AllyD (talk) 14:54, 14 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Noted with Thanks AvyuktOrai (talk) 05:13, 15 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nadeem Jafri has been accepted

Nadeem Jafri, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask at the help desk. Once you have made at least 10 edits and had an account for at least four days, you will have the option to create articles yourself without posting a request to Articles for creation.

If you would like to help us improve this process, please consider leaving us some feedback.

Thanks again, and happy editing!

Greenman (talk) 10:27, 3 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Greenman/Admin,

Thanks for accepting my article and converting it from draft to an article. Though after your approval, other editor nominated it for speed deletion. I did the changes as per his and my mentor suggestions. Now another editor has deleted the article for advert and COI warnings. Though I vouch I don't have any direct or indrect connection with the article. I have done some changes in Hearty mart page and saw that Mr. Nadeem Jafri is also elligble for wikipedia article as read a lot about him on media. Hence, I created the article.

You approved the article so I am sure you too would have checked all these points. Now, how I can bring back my article as after speed deletion nomination I toned down the article and removed few less relevant sections, added more relevant sections and added more citations ( total 21 citations were in the article). AvyuktOrai (talk) 14:11, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @AvyuktOrai: you can ask the deleting admins for the article to be restored to draft and continue working on it there, before submitting it for an additional review if you think the points have been addressed. I unfortunately can't access the deleted article, so can't comment on whether I made a mistake accepting it, or whether I'd disagree with the speedy deletion nomination. Greenman (talk) 16:39, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Nadeem Jafri

If this is the first article that you have created, you may want to read the guide to writing your first article.
You may want to consider using the Article Wizard to help you create articles.

A tag has been placed on Nadeem Jafri, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Almandavi (talk) 05:32, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kathpurva has been accepted

Kathpurva, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask at the help desk. Once you have made at least 10 edits and had an account for at least four days, you will have the option to create articles yourself without posting a request to Articles for creation.

If you would like to help us improve this process, please consider leaving us some feedback.

Thanks again, and happy editing!

GSS ^💬 10:29, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Advert and COI warnings

Hello, I'm Deb. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you.
Hello, AvyuktOrai. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for article subjects for more information. We ask that you:

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicizing, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you.Deb (talk) 12:52, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Deb/Admin,

Thanks for prompting wikipedia policy and clause. I will try to keep it in mind for my next article.

I drafted this article in draft and submitted for review to admins. One of the admins accepted it otherwise I would have been working on drafts only. After it got accepted, you deleted it.

I request you to restore it the draft rather then deleting it so that I can keep working on this article. Rest I assure you and vouch I don't have any direct or indrect connection with the article person. I have done some changes in Hearty mart page and saw that Mr. Nadeem Jafri is also elligble for wikipedia article as I read a couple of articles about him on media. Hence, I created the article. AvyuktOrai (talk) 18:07, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviews are mostly not carried out by admins, and User:Greenman, who accepted your article, is not an admin; it's not a case of him/her being wrong. I won't be restoring the article, because it was promotional. Reading "a couple of articles about him on media" (you don't say which media) is not evidence of notability. The references you used were mostly to the company rather than its owner, and even the article on Hearty Mart is already tagged for improvement. You've made very few contributions and it's clear that you are not ready to create articles from scratch; you've only improved them after you've been instructed to do so. You also haven't responded to the COI awareness notice I posted above. What is your connection with Mr Jafri and/or his company? Deb (talk) 07:10, 6 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Deb,

Thanks for the reply and your feedback. I will make sure I incorporate above points/suggestions in my future articles.

Regarding your point about media I have not mentioned in the article - Well total 21 articles were mentioned in the citations and I read all of them, hence I didn't mentioned the media.

Regarding COI awareness notice - I don't have any direct or indirect connection with Mr. Jafri and I can vouch for that too. I have created a place article and after its approval, I tried for some known persons' article such as Mr. Jafri, I am also working on few more profiles who are quite noticable in all big Indian medias. Few of those titles are (Indian Police Service) IPS Shamsher Singh, IPS Bipin Ahire, IAS Avantika Singh and many such more with no direct or indirect connections with any of them. AvyuktOrai (talk) 08:34, 6 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'm glad to hear that. I recommend that you continue to practise by making small amendments and that you create articles only through Wikipedia:Articles for creation for the foreseeable future. One useful thing you could do is to improve the article on Hearty Mart. Deb (talk) 08:48, 6 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, and thanks for the guidance. I will keep this in mind for my future articles. AvyuktOrai (talk) 08:51, 6 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]