User talk:Udi shapiro
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[edit]Hello, Udi shapiro, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.
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- Hi thanks! I believe it is neutral objective and fully referenced. If you see problems with it please let me know and i will correct. Or please correct. 158.143.147.148 (talk) 05:41, 26 June 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Adi Shapiro (June 26)
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This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
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Hello, Udi shapiro!
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Adi Shapiro (June 28)
[edit]This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
The comment the reviewer left was:
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Managing a conflict of interest
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Hello, Udi shapiro. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for article subjects for more information. We ask that you:
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Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicizing, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. 331dot (talk) 09:08, 28 June 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Adi Shapiro (June 28)
[edit]This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Adi Shapiro (June 29)
[edit]This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Some awards looks good to me but there is a lack of reliable and independent references to the subject having significant coverage about the topic. IMO - winning awards only doesn't demonstrate the notability. Your added references aren't reliable and didn't have enough coverage. YouTube is not a reliable source for it please see WP:RSPYOUTUBE. Please restore the previous reviewer decline messages and their comments. If you have any questions to ask then feel free to write on its talk page.
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- Dear Fade258, User:Fade258
- Thank you very much for your thoughtful review and detailed comments.
- I have two points for your consideration:
- Regarding the verifiability of YouTube videos
- In the case of composers, YouTube uploads often function differently from general external coverage. For most competitions mentioned, copyright remains with the composer, and standard practice is that video or audio recordings of winning pieces are given directly to the composer for their use and publication. As a result, performances are typically uploaded to the composer’s own channel rather than by the organizing body.
- This applies to:
- Emergence (KLK) – Adi Shapiro – Emergence for Orchestra (21 May 2025)
- Dragonflies Indoors (KLK) – Adi Shapiro – Dragonflies Indoors for Orchestra (17 May 2025)
- Flourish Regardless (The Sound Ensemble) – Adi Shapiro – Flourish Regardless by the Sound Ensemble
- For each of these, independent primary sources confirming the competition results are provided alongside the performance video.
- Regarding North London Festival, the linked page on their official website includes the announcement of her award alongside the performance.
- Regarding Vienna, the prize was awarded, but the performance occurred earlier as part of the Piano at Nataf concert series. While they maintain a YouTube channel (Piano at Nataf), the specific performance was not uploaded due to technical editing limitations. If necessary for verification, I can request them to upload it formally.
- Regarding Crystalline Metamorphosis (Juilliard), Juilliard provided the video directly to Adi for her use.
- Regarding Demolition and Hakara, these were performed by Purcell students. The school does not upload student performances publicly but provides files to the students themselves.
- I hope this clarifies why YouTube videos are referenced in this draft. They do not serve as independent secondary coverage but rather as primary evidence of the works performed, with competition results attested by the linked organizational sources.
- Regarding secondary source coverage
- I understand the general requirement for significant independent secondary coverage. While such coverage may be forthcoming in the near future given the extraordinary nature of Adi’s achievements at her age, I respectfully note that WP:COMPOSER criterion 4 explicitly states:
- “4. Has written a composition that has won (or in some cases been given a second or other place) in a major music competition not established expressly for newcomers.”
- This criterion defines a sufficient condition for notability for composers and does not require independent secondary source coverage of these wins to establish notability per se.
- I hope these clarifications are helpful, and I would be grateful if you could consider revising your comments accordingly.
- I have restored deleted reviewers' comments.
- Thank you again for your time, expertise, and consideration of this draft.
- Best regards,
- Udi shapiro (talk) 16:32, 29 June 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation
[edit]This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Adi Shapiro (July 14)
[edit]This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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