User talk:HC1852
Your submission at AfC Henry Clay (steamship) was accepted
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ChrisGualtieri (talk) 18:37, 16 November 2013 (UTC)Your submission at Articles for creation: Maria Louisa Hawthorne (August 26)
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This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.
The comment the reviewer left was:
This is very essay-like and opinional, especially as the lack of inline citations makes it hard to know if it is the author's words or someone elses. Things like "she was a natural caregiver", "one fateful invitation", and "These letters also serve as a remembrance of her life, one who was dearly loved by her family and friends." are not neutral or encyclopedic.
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Hello, HC1852!
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Maria Louisa Hawthorne (August 29)
[edit]This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Maria Louisa Hawthorne and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
Your submission at Articles for creation: Maria Louisa Hawthorne (September 1)
[edit]This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia articleâthat is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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