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    Your submission at Articles for creation: Unathi Mkhize (December 11)

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    Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Thilio was:
    This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
    Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
    CONFUSED SPIRIT(Thilio).Talk 09:54, 11 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    @Thilio Thank you for your review. However, I do not believe the writing is the issue in this case. I intend to revisit the sourcing, but the entry itself is written in a clear, neutral, and encyclopedic tone, without any promotional language. The wording concerns raised by the previous reviewer have already been addressed, and he also confirmed that the matter was resolved on his talk page. Afro 📢Talk! 10:10, 11 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    @Afrowriter here's my cleanup words recommendation sex symbol remove or neutralize, eye candy remove it, bad boy image just an act make it neutral. explosive entry and treacherous make it neutral and please Fix spelling Isreal should be Israel.. internet personal should be internet personality. sex symbol remove it or neutralize it, eye candy remove it. bad boy image just an act make it neutral. also Fix spacing, commas and capitalization in infobox and text AND finally the most important part Add reliable, independent sources showing substantial coverage of the subject. after that resubmit and leave notes on my User Talk. Thanks. CONFUSED SPIRIT(Thilio).Talk 11:27, 11 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    @Thilio Thanks for your feedback Friend.
    Thought I did fixed most of this issues but clearly escaped my mind as I am not the creator of the article we perform the clean up at my own free time and have it resubmitted but the sex symbol thing remains. Am going to state my reasons when am back online here Afro 📢Talk! 11:35, 11 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

    Concern regarding Draft:Derek Hale

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    Information icon Hello, Afrowriter. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Derek Hale, a page you created, has not been edited in at least five months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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    Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 07:07, 12 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

    A tag has been placed on File:Billy playin for Arsenal.jpg requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section F7 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because it is a non-free file from a commercial source (e.g. Associated Press, Getty Images), where the file itself is not the subject of sourced commentary. If you can explain why the file can be used under the non-free content guidelines, please add the appropriate non-free use tag and rationale.

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