Talk:Edwardsville Amazon warehouse collapse

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by History6042 talk 18:36, 28 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Departure– (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

Departure– (talk) 02:38, 27 June 2025 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

Image eligibility:

QPQ: Done.
Overall: MumphingSquirrel (talk) 19:58, 27 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

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Nominator: Departure– (talk · contribs) 02:48, 19 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: EF5 (talk · contribs) 14:21, 7 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Starting review sometime today. EF5 14:21, 7 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies for the delay; school is starting back up this Thursday and I can continue the review then. For now I'm without a computer. EF5 23:51, 9 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@EF5: Thanks for doing this review. I'm going to expand the article to a rough completion before I finish this GA (maybe 2 or 3 days?). I have not given up on it. I've just been awfully demotivated from editing recently (no specific reason), which is why I haven't done much here or elsewhere in that time. Departure– (talk) 23:43, 13 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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I'm going to try to review this without using one of those review templates, if you don't mind.

Images

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  • For File:Response to the Edwardsville warehouse tornado.png, is an NFF truly needed? We already have a free image of the warehouse following the tornado, so I'm not sure if Illustrate the response and immediate aftermath of the collapse would hold up as an NFF rationale. You could, however, use an NFF of the tornado itself.

Prose

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  • 8 p.m. Friday through and 3 a.m. Saturday Not a huge deal, but I'd suggest adding the ":00"s afterwards, given that's how other times are formatted in the article.
  • Link Tornado at the first mention in the lead.
  • that oversees > that oversaw, given this event happened in the past and was largely destroyed.

Sources

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Spotcheck of random sources:

  • [2] - Does verify info cited, but this is an WP:SPS. Is there any better source you could find?
  • [9] - Verifies info used to cite.
  • [13] - Does verify, but says nothing about the tornado being "strong" (which has a specific usage in tornado terminology)
  • [17] - Does verify info.
  • [30] - Does verify info.
  • For all the IEM references, could you set the publisher to Iowa State University?
  • Buisness Insider (ref 31) is marked as "marginally reliable" at WP:RSP.
  • Delink Capitol News Illinois in ref 37, as no article exists.