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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jeremy Lansman (June 26)
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This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
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Hello, Evonschrader!
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jeremy Lansman (August 25)
[edit]This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Wikipedia articles should avoid using puffery, flattery, essay-like writing, or opinionated statements in its own voice. Calling the subject a "trailblazer" sounds too complimentary, and "inventive technical wizard" is just showering the subject with praise. "Passionate advocate" is also borderline. These are examples of the types of labels we might put in quotation marks with attribution if a source describes the subject as being these things, but not things a Wikipedia article would say in its own words.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Jeremy Lansman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.