Talk:Red Seidelson

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 00:10, 15 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 17:09, 15 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

  • Birth name should be cited in body.
    • I added it in the body as well as that he went under a different name in the U.S.
  • Hmm, do you know if the Toronto Tigers played Canadian football or American?
    • They were based in Toronto, Ohio, so American (I added that they were Ohio-based in the article).
  • I added cats Coaches of American football from Pennsylvania, and Jewish Romanian sportspeople.
  • Jersey numbers in infobox need cited.
  • I unlinked Pittsburgh on the second instance in the infobox.
  • I clicked on ref 7 to see what they meant by scrub but the ref isn't clipped.

Spot checks

  • Ref 2 looks okay.
  • Ref 7 not clipped.
  • Ref 14 looks good.
  • Ref 17 looks good.

Great work! Really interesting guy. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 17:09, 15 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination

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Seidelson, c. 1923
Seidelson, c. 1923
  • ... that American football player Red Seidelson (pictured) reportedly played over 40 games in one season?
  • ALT1: ... that at the same time he played in the NFL, Red Seidelson (pictured) worked as a dentist? Source: same
  • ALT2: ... that NFL player Red Seidelson (pictured) reportedly had such a reputation as a fighter that police officers sometimes asked him to come with them as "insurance" if they expected "any sticky situations"? Source: same
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Rising Star (1991 ship)
  • Comment: To do QPQ within a day or so. Both moved to mainspace and promoted to GA recently.
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 417 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:01, 23 September 2025 (UTC).[reply]