Talk:Mount Bernacci
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Feedback from New Page Review process
[edit]I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Nice work.
North8000 (talk) 11:27, 31 May 2022 (UTC)
Peer review
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I've listed this article for peer review because this I've managed to create an article about this local hilltop, I just want to expand it even more with concise content.
Thanks, Idaljiu (talk) 18:28, 20 August 2025 (UTC)
- From LCP;
- The lead section should not contain references it should only reflect whats in the rest of the article. The exception to that is when information in the lead is very controversial but that doesnt apply here.
- Eg so information like "referred to as Mount Hantu or Amtig." should be move down and summarised in the lead
- Similarly "The mountain served as the base of operations for the Tangcong Vaca Guerilla Unit [bcl] during the Japanese occupation, taking name from the massif"
- The article needs a new section on WW2 military history for this to be moved to. LeChatiliers Pupper (talk) 06:19, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
Comments from TheNuggeteer
[edit]- Sources 1 and 3 are duplicated.
- Etymology section is unsourced.
- Is there anywhere else you can find source 9? Scribd is unreliable.
- Is there something wrong with the World Bank source?
- Do you have any information where "Tangcong Vaca" came from?
- Can you add some information on the "Tangcong Vaca unit"? In some sources with Tangcong Vaca, this military unit shows up.
- Add more information of it being part of Ragay Hills.
- Since there isn't more information about the biodiversity, remove the "Birds" header.
- Did the mountain become known through the accidents?
- Add the English translation of the local name to the prose.
- In the talk page, put the Peer review notice at the top of the page.
Here are all the comments I can offer. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter")
11:28, 28 August 2025 (UTC)