Talk:2022 Andover tornado

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 18:15, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The 2022 Andover tornado, as seen at EF3 intensity
The 2022 Andover tornado, as seen at EF3 intensity
  • ... that despite damaging over 1,000 buildings, the 2022 Andover tornado (pictured) only injured three people?
Created by EF5 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

EF5 20:03, 19 November 2024 (UTC).[reply]

The tornado seen from Andover City Hall
  • Hi @EF5:, review follows: article created 19 November and exceeds minimum length; article is well enough written and generally cited throughout, I've tagged a few instances where it is not; I am no tornado expert but the sources used look to be reliable for the subject; I noted that the "Meteorological synopsis" section is copy pasted from the source, but that this is from the federal NOAA so is PD; hook fact is interesting, stated in the article and checks out to sources; a QPQ has been carried out; image is OK but I wonder if the video could appear instead; they tend to do well at DYK. If you can address the citations needed I think this should be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 09:54, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I was actually just about to upload that video, but it appears that someone got to it first. Yes, that video would be much better. I’ll get to the citations in a bit. EF5 13:02, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Dumelow: All CNs have been addressed. The stuff in the lede is cited in the main prose, same goes with infobox content. EF5 13:36, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks @EF5:. Looks good to go - Dumelow (talk) 13:45, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

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Nominator: EF5 (talk · contribs) 14:44, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Therapyisgood (talk · contribs) 15:31, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]


taking. Therapyisgood (talk) 15:31, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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I'd invoke WP:IAR as these two tornadoes are very often mixed up. Plus, that says preferable and not "required". EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • "drill-bit" tornado I have no idea what a "drill-bit" tornado is, can you link/explain?
Not added by me (I think?);  Done, removed. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • severe EF3 damage I'm not sure what EF3 means, or that "EF3" can accurately describe damage (ie rather than a tornado)
 Done, added. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • The tornado first touched down southwest of Andover in Sedgwick County, first causing minor damage. not sure the first "first" is needed
 Done, removed. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • The tornado reached EF3 can you explain what scale this is on? As someone unfamiliar with tornadoes I have no idea.
 Done, mentioned in lede per above comment. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • A powerful low pressure system link/explain low/pressure system, no clue what that means
 Done, linked. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • "sharp dryline" no clue what a dryline is
 Done, linked. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • "including a 10% risk area for tornadoes." this needs further explanation, what is a "risk area"?
 Done, linked. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • warm front link/explain, is this related to the "dryline" above?
 Done, linked. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • link Wichita
 Done, linked. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • "supercell" no idea again what this means
 Done, linked. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • EF0 intensity wind speed?
 Done, added. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • "high-end EF2" wind speed?
See below. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • for all of these EF1/2/3/4/5 the wind speeds are needed, also is there anything else to the intensity other than wind speeds?
I disagree that all are needed; it would make the article way too clunky. Numerous other tornado GAs (Greensburg tornado, 2011 Cordova–Blountsville tornado, 2014 Pilger, Nebraska, tornado family, etc.) give EF damage ratings without exact wind speeds.
  • damage was rated EF2 who rated the damage?
 Done, added.
  • last paragraph in the "Tornado summary" section needs broken up into 2 paragraphs
 Done, fixed.
  • The building was completely destroyed and swept from its slab foundation, though it lacked interior walls I don't understand, how could it lack interior walls?
Some buildings are just built terrible. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • 1,074 buildings were damaged by the tornado to varying degrees; up to 400 of those were destroyed. don't start a sentence with a number
 Done, added "An estimated". EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • The United States Air Force deployed 150 airmen were they all men? MOS:GNL would suggest using a different term
See Airman; that's the official term and isn't gender-related. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • ref 1 needs an ndash instead of a hyphen
 Done.
  • mix of 2024-11-29, Retrieved November 19, 2024, and Retrieved 17 October 2022 style in refs
 Done, added {{use mdy dates}}. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • what makes "Survive-a-Storm" a reliable reference?
 Done, removed. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • now that a few years have passed, is there any update to the recovery from the tornadoes? ie rebuilding
I'll get to this shortly. EF5 16:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@EF5: any update? Therapyisgood (talk) 04:35, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@EF5: Therapyisgood (talk) 22:58, 16 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'll get to this shortly, sorry. Been trying to scale back my WP editing while still closing things I've had open. EF5 15:30, 17 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Er… I'll just place this back in the queue. Weird. EF5 04:32, 18 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

all for now, placing on hold. Therapyisgood (talk) 16:07, 1 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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