Draft talk:The RAW Project

AfC resubmission note

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Thank you for the earlier review. The draft has been revised to address the concern about promotional tone: The long list of “notable artists” has been removed; only names supported by independent mainstream coverage remain. Founders’ names were moved from the lead to the “Organization” section. Phrasing in project descriptions was neutralized (e.g. “murals throughout the campus” instead of “open-air gallery”). Independent, reliable sources (NPR, Miami Herald, Westword, Artnet, NBC 6) are now emphasized; project materials are used only for basic facts. The intention is an encyclopedic overview of the project’s history and reception, without promotional detail. SarahWritesArt (talk) 16:50, 17 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]