Draft:La Concordia massacre

La Concordia massacre
La Concordia massacre
Part of Mexican drug war
Location	La Concordia, Chiapas, Mexico
Date	28 June 2024
Deaths	20 killed
Perpetrator	Sinaloa Cartel

Submission declined on 14 November 2025 by Commandant Quacks-a-lot (talk).

Really, the article is just far too short as it is. Not much information can be gleaned from it. Try to beef it up a bit. How were the killings carried out? What was the reasoning for it? What impact did it have?

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Declined by Commandant Quacks-a-lot 6 days ago. Last edited by Commandant Quacks-a-lot 6 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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The La Concordia massacre was a massacre in La Concordia, Chiapas, Mexico that took place on 28 June 2024 when members of the Sinaloa Cartel killed 20 members of the Jalisco New Generation Cartel.^[1]^[2]^[3]

References

^ Pablo Ferri (2 July 2024). "Sinaloa Cartel claims responsibility for new massacre of 19 people in Chiapas". El País. Retrieved 11 November 2025.
^ David Vicenteño (1 July 2024). "Masacre en Chiapas, confirman 20 muertos por una disputa entre cárteles en La Concordia". Excelsior (in Spanish). Retrieved 11 November 2025.
^ "At least 20 killed in drug cartels' clash in southern Mexico". News.am. 2 July 2024. Retrieved 13 November 2025.

[1] Pablo Ferri (2 July 2024). "Sinaloa Cartel claims responsibility for new massacre of 19 people in Chiapas". El País. Retrieved 11 November 2025.

[2] David Vicenteño (1 July 2024). "Masacre en Chiapas, confirman 20 muertos por una disputa entre cárteles en La Concordia". Excelsior (in Spanish). Retrieved 11 November 2025.

[3] "At least 20 killed in drug cartels' clash in southern Mexico". News.am. 2 July 2024. Retrieved 13 November 2025.

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