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Feedback on the document-Anti-Western sentiment in China/ An soyul

This piece offers a broad and in-depth exploration of the formation and evolution of anti-Western sentiment in China, grounded in historical events and social contexts. It demonstrates a high level of completeness in both the depth and breadth of information. By tracing developments from the Qing Dynasty to the present day, the essay effectively outlines how anti-Western sentiment has emerged within various political and social frameworks, highlighting key turning points such as the 1999 bombing of the Chinese embassy in Yugoslavia, the 2008 Tibet protests, and the Olympic torch relay incident. Furthermore, it provides valuable insight into recent trends by covering topics such as patriotic education, state-led media strategies, and the responses of younger generations in digital spaces. However, there are also some areas that could be improved. The connections between different periods and events feel somewhat fragmented, making it difficult to clearly identify the historical continuity or structural transformation of anti-Western sentiment over time. For example, the relationship between anti-Western attitudes during the Qing Dynasty and the nationalist sentiments among today’s youth is not sufficiently elaborated, which may make it harder for readers to follow the narrative. Additionally, while the Chinese government’s perspective is well represented, the piece lacks a more balanced approach that includes international viewpoints or critical analysis. Because the structure largely focuses on case-by-case developments, the conclusion would benefit from a clearer summary of the main points and a reemphasis of the central theme to enhance the overall cohesion of the essay. In conclusion, this work is highly commendable for its factual depth and insightful analysis of the topic. Nonetheless, with improvements in structural coherence and balance of perspectives, it could be further elevated into a more persuasive and refined discussion. An soyul (talk) 04:25, 11 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]