User talk:Yamato2
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ásta Sigurðardóttir (October 30)
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The subject is no doubt notable but there are other problems here. I signaled these in an edit summary but they were not addressed. In short, the whole thing needs an overhaul, for neutral language but also for formatting issues, I see now: dates are linked, book titles need to be italicized, there are bare URLs for some of the references, capitalization in section headings, etc. etc. And then there is the sourcing: of the first four, one is clearly acceptable (but not accessible to me), but the other three are basically just internet blurbs on questionable websites that don't add anything to what the Literary Encyclopedia already offers. And then there's a bunch of totally unsourced paragraphs. All this can be done by editing judiciously, with perhaps a few cuts.
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Hello, Yamato2!
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- Thank you for the review! I've replaced the questionable sources and revised the text for neutrality. Please let me know if the updated article now meets the criteria or what else should I do to improve it? Yamato2 (talk) 13:35, 3 November 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Ásta Sigurðardóttir has been accepted
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MCE89 (talk) 10:01, 4 November 2025 (UTC)- Awesome, thanks for the feedback! Yamato2 (talk) 11:47, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
