User talk:Pascal1728

Welcome!

Hi Pascal1728, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like it here and decide to stay. Our intro page provides helpful information for new users—please check it out! If you have any questions, you can get help from experienced editors at the Teahouse. Happy editing! Paradoctor (talk) 16:18, 16 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft was moved

I moved your draft from draft:Quantum Magic State to draft:Magic state, because the qualifier was unnecessary, and this article should use sentence case per WP:TITLECAPS. Paradoctor (talk) 16:21, 16 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Magic state (June 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CoconutOctopus was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Magic state and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

CoconutOctopus talk 11:00, 17 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Pascal1728! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! CoconutOctopus talk 11:00, 17 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Where exactly should I modify ?' Pascal1728 (talk) 11:15, 17 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

As it says directly above, the WP:TEAHOUSE is the place to find assistance. Happy editing! Paradoctor (talk) 11:31, 17 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I think the page has gotten better Pascal1728 (talk) 08:44, 18 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I am not the right person to tell. If you don't want to use the Teahouse to get input, then you should resubmit the draft, if you think you have addressed the concerns raised. In general, article / draft content should be discussed at the respective talk pages, not in your own space, see WP:OWNTALK. Paradoctor (talk) 09:12, 18 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Ah I see! Okay I will do it Pascal1728 (talk) 09:37, 18 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]