User talk:Kvisitacion
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Great Falls Precision Teaching Project (July 26)
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This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
The comment the reviewer left was:
- in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
- reliable
- secondary
- independent of the subject
I don't see evidence from the sources that this project was notable by WP standards. Ref. 3 looks like a good source, but the others are about precision teaching in general (not this specific project) or are unreliable (personal communication, Ref. 2, or a conference report, Ref. 10). If more particular sources similar to 3 could be found that might be enough to establish notability. The article has other problems as well: Inconsistent formatting, personal communication as a source (which might suggest an undisclosed COI), and excessive use of uniformly-sized subsections, which is suggestive of LLM use (though I can't prove this).
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Hello, Kvisitacion!
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Great Falls Precision Teaching Project (November 6)
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Your draft shows signs of having been generated by a large language model, such as ChatGPT. Their outputs usually have multiple issues that prevent them from meeting our guidelines on writing articles. These include:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- Promotional tone, editorializing and other words to watch
- Vague, generic, and speculative statements extrapolated from similar subjects
- Essay-like writing
- Hallucinations (plausible-sounding, but false information) and non-existent references
- Close paraphrasing
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Great Falls Precision Teaching Project and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
- Thank you for your note! I did not use a LLM to draft the article—this article was drafted as part of a graduate-level writing course. I am interested in revising this and would appreciate some more specific feedback about sentences or paragraphs that are problematic. I am happy to revise them. Kvisitacion (talk) 15:13, 12 November 2025 (UTC)
