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Your submission at Articles for creation: Climate Change and Reproductive Health (October 30)
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This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
The comment the reviewer left was:
In addition to needing more sources, this draft's prose also needs some work. For example, the sentence "Climate change leads to Climate change poses serious threats to women’s reproductive health and overall well-being." appears to cut off and then restart partway through. The first sentence "Climate change and reproductive health poses a significant threat to overall health, including reproductive health and well-being." is also somewhat confusingly written.
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Hello, EGBI DELIGHT!
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Climate Change and Reproductive Health (November 4)
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This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
- in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
- reliable
- secondary
- independent of the subject
Your draft shows signs of having been generated by a large language model, such as ChatGPT. Their outputs usually have multiple issues that prevent them from meeting our guidelines on writing articles. These include:
The comment the reviewer left was:
- Promotional tone, editorializing and other words to watch
- Vague, generic, and speculative statements extrapolated from similar subjects
- Essay-like writing
- Hallucinations (plausible-sounding, but false information) and non-existent references
- Close paraphrasing
Article reads as very SYNTH-y to me. If there were more than 5 sources I might let it go, but none of the sources is talking about "reproductive health", only specific health outcomes like preterm births and general fertility rates. Ref. 3 comes closest to general coverage with "pregnancy complications" but Frontiers is a questionable publisher (see WP:RS/N). Tying all these sources together looks like WP:OR. Also, there is clear LLM use, with formatting and stylistic giveaways. This isn't forbidden, but I have to wonder if someone didn't edit their LLM output, did they double-check all claims?
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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