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Biographies of living people need a citation for any claim that can be reasonably challenged. Upon a review of the sources, ref 1, 2 and 3 do not verify the exact years that Dong was with Zhejiang University, only that he went there. Neither do they verify that he went to Beijing Jiaotong University. Also, adding a as his online CV shows
is not a valid citation. You need to cite it according to the relevant guidelines. As reviewers, we are not obliged to search online for his CV unless it is within the article itself and at the end of the sentence/paragraph that the CV is meant to verify; the onus is on you to cite it for us and other future readers.
With regards to the Career section, the CNN article only mentions that Dong is the "president of Peking First Advisory". It does not mention that he cofounded the company in 2011, nor does it state the company shut down in 2012. Sources are required for both of these statements. And you also need to provide a citation that he moved to HK and worked in catering and retailing, as they are, again, claims that can be reasonably challenged.
Please consider the above when improving your draft. Simply removing the tags I added (which, by the way, are meant to help you know which places need citations) and not improving on the content does not make the draft more likely to be accepted, and are grounds for an immediate decline. S5A-0043đ(Talk) 02:03, 14 September 2025 (UTC)