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Your submission at Articles for creation: Frank Jotzo (June 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KSFT was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

None of the cited sources is independent of the subject. Independent sources are needed to show that a subject is notable.

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KSFT ^(t|c) 14:49, 23 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! 128.176.228.207, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KSFT ^(t|c) 14:49, 23 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Frank Jotzo has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Frank Jotzo. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 18:13, 23 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Frank Jotzo (August 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ToThAc was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

It's just showing news outlets, not any definitive news article on the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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ToThAc (talk) 20:38, 17 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

RE:10:32:38, 28 August 2017 review of submission by 128.176.228.207

You have not properly addressed the reason for which your submission was declined. Please go back and read (or reread) my comment and contact me on my talk page if you still have any questions. Thank you. ToThAc (talk) 16:53, 28 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, what I meant to say was, you might want to use the {{cite web}} template to cite your sources. Check the template documentation on how to use it. Thank you. ToThAc (talk) 16:55, 28 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Frank Jotzo (October 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrStrauss was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines for academics, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DrStrauss talk 21:03, 9 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Frank Jotzo has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Frank Jotzo. Thanks! DGG ( talk ) 18:47, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Frank Jotzo has been accepted

Frank Jotzo, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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DGG ( talk ) 04:37, 22 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]