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[edit]Strengths
[edit]- Good initial structure
- Interesting case
Suggestions
[edit]- Add more in-text citations --- it is important to cite your sources on Wikipedia, so readers can access the information used! Reference the example articles to see how each paragraph has at least one citation. For help on adding citations and formatting them with a reference template, reference the Week 4 video.
- Refine the tone and revise for grammar
- Expand more on the decisions sections --- it would be interesting to hear what laws were applied and how the final decision was made
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