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It has just been found that it is not the young-blood that is beneficial, but rather, it is the dilution of the bad stuff in the old blood that reduces effects of ageing: https://newatlas.com/medical/diluted-blood-plasma-reverse-aging-in-mice/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 110.143.72.26 (talk) 01:59, 17 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Requested Edits 1. "The scientific community currently views the practice as essentially pseudoscientific, with comparisons to snake oil." This needs to change. It is not the entire scientific community, rather a small number of people with business conflicts of interest. There are multiple companies working in this space and not all of them have been called snake oil. If someone has called one of the company's products snake oil, these criticisms should be moved to the appropriate subheading. There is real science behind Ambrosia's treatments, for instance, as they conducted a registered, approved clinical trial. 2. "There are also concerns of harm. The U.S. Food and Drug Administration, in 2019, cautioned "consumers against receiving young donor plasma infusions" stating that they are an "unproven treatment"." Ambrosia has reported that the FDA did not research their announcement, which is an important fact which should be added to the article if the FDA announcement is going to be kept. If there are concerns of harm, what concerns and who expressed them should be included. 3. "Parabiosis experiments are difficult to generalize, as the circulatory systems of the mice are fully joined and it is unclear whether the benefits come from the sharing of blood or the older mouse's access to the younger mouse's organs." That is not correct. There have been numerous mouse studies showing it is the young blood itself, and molecules in the young blood, which are responsible for the effect. This needs to be updated. 4. "A study conducted at UC Berkeley found that blood from older mice hurt younger mice, while older mice were not benefited by the blood of younger mice." This is misleading. Every other parabiosis author has concluded that parabiosis produces improvements, and there are many such publications. Even Conboy's previous publications say improvements were found. This evidence needs to be included so that readers can understand the full picture. 5. "In experiments like this, researchers found that some of these mice died quickly (11 out of 69 in one experiment) for reasons the scientists could not explain, but described as possibly some form of rejection." This information is from the same biased article. Also, it is not relevant. In parabiosis, two animals are surgically connected via their flanks. Transfusions are an IV infusion. What the reporter is describing is parabiotic disease which is due to the direct connection of the animals. There is a pattern of bias in this article. 6. "Amy Wagers, a researcher who coauthored several mouse studies on young blood transfusion, has said that her papers do not provide a scientific basis for some of the existing human trials." Amy Wagers has a business conflict of interest, in the company Elevian. Readers need this information if this criticism is going to be included at all. 7. "Evidence from two large studies in 2017 showed that the transfusion of blood from younger donors to older people led to outcomes that were either no different from, or led to worse outcomes than, blood from older donors." These are not prospective trials. Ambrosia conducted a prospective trial and that is considered a higher standard of scientific results. The results posted on Ambrosia's website should be included. 8. "Research on blood transfusion outcomes has been complicated by the lack of careful characterization of the transfusion products that have been used in clinical trials; studies had focused on how storage methods and duration might affect blood, but not on the differences among lots of blood themselves." This is not relevant. The cited study is examining blood storage duration, while young blood transfusions refers to the age of the donor. It should be removed. To be continued in a second post. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk) 06:19, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Going to need reliable references for these proposed changes. Greyjoy^talk 06:21, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] 1. The "snake oil" term appears to come from Michael Conboy's quote about the Young Blood Institute. https://www.statnews.com/2018/03/02/young-blood-anti-aging-study/ Is there a reference for the claim of being pseudoscience? 2. https://www.longevity.technology/young-blood-back-on-the-menu/ https://liveforever.club/blog/ambrosia-plasma-relaunches-announces-improvement-in-key-ageing-biomarkers 3. In this research article, young mouse plasma is injected and improvements are seen, contradicting the hypothesis from the article that direct surgical connection is required https://www.nature.com/articles/nm.3569 4. Here are 6, and there are even more. http://www.nature.com/nm/journal/v20/n6/full/nm.3569.html https://www.nature.com/articles/ncomms8131 http://diabetes.diabetesjournals.org/content/62/8/2843.long http://www.cell.com/cell-stem-cell/fulltext/S1934-5909(11)00580-7 http://www.cell.com/cell/fulltext/S0092-8674(13)00456-X http://www.nature.com/nature/journal/v433/n7027/abs/nature03260.html 5. Here is the wikipedia articles on parabiosis and transfusions, and an abstract which hypothesizes on the cause of parabiotic disease. Modern blood transfusions do not have any white blood cells in the blood products. https://journals.lww.com/transplantjournal/abstract/1966/01000/cytological_analysis_of_parabiotic_disease_in_mice.4.aspx https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parabiosis https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blood_transfusion 6. https://www.elevian.com/amy-wagers 7. www.ambrosiaplasma.com 8. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/28988603 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk) 06:54, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Do you also want citations/references for the requested edits 9-16 in the following section? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk) 07:07, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] And the article is currently protected because of this SPA IP's edits... Meters (talk) 06:28, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] What does SPA IP mean? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk) 06:41, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] SPA = single purpose account. See WP:SPA. IP = Internet protocol See WP:IP Meters (talk) 06:45, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I have responded to your question under the section Requested Edits 2. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk) 07:01, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Regarding the actual content of this request, I suspect that none of us volunteers has the time to write an overarching reply to all the points, but let me address the first one. The term "snake oil" is used in multiple places by multiple people. It is not exactly a scientific term but it clearly reflects the scientific consensus, and I think it works well. The only people who have a business interest here are the representatives of the companies peddling these treatments. --bonadea contributions talk 09:17, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Regarding requested edit #1. The term snake oil originated from a quote Michael Conboy used to describe the Young Blood Institute. I have already provided a reference for this. I request you move the term snake oil to the section on Young Blood Institute. I have also explained that the Young Blood Institute does not provide young blood transfusions. They provide plasma exchange. If you have evidence to the contrary, post your references. 210.6.209.89 (talk) 09:24, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Bonadea, the sentence we are discussing is, "The scientific community currently views the practice as essentially pseudoscientific, with comparisons to snake oil." There are 3 references: an article from sciencebasedmedicine.org, an article from Scientific American, and the FDA's announcement. The Scientific American article includes the term "snake oil" once, when Michael Conboy is describing Maharaj's clinical trial. The FDA's announcement includes neither the terms pseudoscience nor "snake oil". The sciencebasedmedicine.org article is written by a single person and does not reflect the scientific consensus. You are defining consensus of "snake oil" on exactly two people's words. And the consensus of pseudoscience on exactly one person's words.210.6.209.89 (talk) 11:35, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Requested Edits 2 9. The first section under Commercial development describes the FDA's unresearched announcement. If this is going to be included at all, perhaps it should be moved to another section, and this section would focus on the commercial development, not the regulator's response. 10. "A startup company, Ambrosia, has been selling "young blood transfusions" for $8,000 since 2016 under the guise of running a clinical trial, to see if such transfusions lead to changes in the blood of recipients." There is no reason to put quotes around "young blood transfusion", the article title is already young blood transfusion. The word guise is biased and is not a neutral point of view. 11. "The clinical trial has no control arm and so is neither randomized nor blind." This is incorrect. The clinical trial included a control group, but it did not include a placebo. This is not written from a neutral point of view. Many clinical studies are non-randomized and open label. 12. "The company was started by Jesse Karmazin, a medical school graduate without a license to practice medicine." This is misleading. All of the doctors who have provided Ambrosia's treatments have been fully licensed. Healthcare CEOs do not typically have licensed to practice medicine. 13. "David Wright is the licensed doctor overseeing the clinical trial; in his practice he administers intravenous treatments of vitamins and antibiotics for nontraditional purposes and was disciplined by the California Medical Board for the latter in 2015." This should be removed. Dr. Wright no longer works with Ambrosia and most of Ambrosia's treatments have been delivered by other physicians at this point. He was removed before the end of the clinical trial, which successfully concluded in 2018. 14. "Jonathan Kimmelman, a bioethicist from McGill University, suggests that Ambrosia is running this as a trial as they would be unable to get FDA approval to sell this treatment otherwise." This is incorrect. Blood products are approved drugs in the United States. Once the FDA approves a drug, doctors are free to prescribe it according to their judgment. 15. "On February 19, 2019, Ambrosia announced it stopped testing the treatment, responding to concerns from the FDA." Ambrosia has stated it paused treatments, and has since restarted treating patients in the same year, 2019. The word "testing" makes no sense since their clinical trial ended successfully in 2018. This needs to be updated as it misleads readers; Ambrosia is currently open for business and treating patients. 16. Young Blood Institute This entire section should be removed. Despite their name, the Young Blood Institute does not offer young blood transfusions. They offer plasma exchange. Perhaps this section should be moved to an article on plasma exchange. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk) 06:40, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] We're still waiting for you to respond to the conflict of interest notice on your talk page. Do you have a conflict of interest in any way with respect to any of the companies or people you are attempting to write about?Meters (talk) 06:47, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I am in full compliance with Wikipedia's policies and there are no issues. Is there anything else I need to do? I am asking you to make these changes. They are factual. Has your question been fully addressed? 210.6.209.89 (talk) 06:58, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Could you learn to sign your posts please with four Tildes like this ~~~~. Thank you so much. -Roxy, the PROD. . wooF 07:46, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Also, that is not a 'no.' Do you have a conflict of interest? Yes or no. --Mr. Vernon (talk) 08:21, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Mr. Vernon, I have reviewed Wikipedia's policy and I am telling you I am in full compliance with all aspects of it. 210.6.209.89 (talk) 08:25, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Reminder: you need to address this issue. Please do it before making any other edits to articles or talk pages. It is mandatory, which means that you are in fact not in compliance with policy when you discuss matters unrelated to your COI. --bonadea contributions talk 14:28, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Bonadea, I have already addressed this. I am in full compliance with wikipedia policies. You have not responded to my remarks on the requested edit #1. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk) 14:42, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Roxy the dog, I have tried to change the autosigned signatures to ~~~~ but Meters is threatening to block me for doing so. 210.6.209.89 (talk) 08:32, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Stop making stuff up. -Roxy, the PROD. . wooF 08:33, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I am not making stuff up. What are you talking about? The evidence is recorded on this website. You are arguing when you should be examining the evidence. 210.6.209.89 (talk) 08:45, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Do not change any existing signatures because adding four tildes would give a false timestamp. We are asking you to observe WP:SIG and WP:INDENT. Johnuniq (talk) 08:34, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Is that official wikipedia policy? 210.6.209.89 (talk) 08:45, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I have reviewed the policies, and my edits are consistent with wikipedia policies. You threatened to ban me for making edits which are consistent with wikipedia policy. 210.6.209.89 (talk) 08:53, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Bonadea has also threatened to ban me for making edits which are consistent with wikipedia policy, and I cannot message him since his page is protected. 210.6.209.89 (talk) 09:00, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Just stop changing time stamps. If there is a time stamp on the talk page (even when it has been added by Sinebot or another editor using the {{unsigned}} template, you absolutely must not edit that post to replace the time stamp by four tildes. If you add a signature at any point after the actual time when the post was first placed on the talk page, four tildes cannot be used. Is that explanation clear enough, or are you still uncertain of how to approach this? --bonadea contributions talk 09:01, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Bonadea, I have reviewed wikipedia's policies. Nowhere in the policies is that stated. Your explanation is incorrect.210.6.209.89 (talk) 09:05, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] It is troubling that you refuse to accept that your edits are disruptive, when multiple experienced editors take the trouble of informing you about it. Did you have the time to actually read the message I posted to your user talk page before you removed it? In any case, it doesn't much matter as long as you stop faffing about with other editors' posts, and stop changing time stamps. If the disruptive edits continue, some administrator will probably block you – it is your own choice, if you want to edit in a collaborative manner or not. --bonadea contributions talk 09:10, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Bonadea, it is not my problem if you are feeling troubled. I am not being disruptive. Be specific and we can address each concern individually. You have presented no evidence. My edits are in compliance with wikipedia policy. I read your messages and responded here, since your page is protected. I am not "faffing about", I have posted a list of proposed edits, and I was archiving old, finished discussions. I am not being disruptive, you are harassing me, threatening me with being banned, and you are not in compliance with wikipedia policy.210.6.209.89 (talk) 09:13, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I am not being disruptive. Please see multiple posts above and on your talk page explaining to you why and how the edits you made were disruptive. (What I cannot find is a single instance where anyone other than you has talked about banning – it is not the same thing as blocking, as I'm sure you are aware, since you say you have been reading up on Wikipedia's policies.) Again, it is up to you whether you want to edit in a collaborative manner or not, and this is my final comment in this discussion, as it does not belong on an article talk page (it is unfortunate that you remove all user talk page messages instead of letting the behavioural discussion happen there, but that is also your choice). --bonadea contributions talk 09:25, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I am not being disruptive and you are edit warring, which is against wikipedia policy. Again, I want to archive old, finished discussions and I have posted 16 proposed edits. I remove edits from my talk page once they are addressed because this IP is shared. Blocking and banning have the same outcome. I would also prefer it if you address the 16 proposed edits. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk • contribs) 09:36, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Requested edits: continued discussion from User talk:YorkshireLad Moving discussion here from User talk:YorkshireLad (see archive), as requested by User:210.6.209.89. @210.6.209.89: I do understand the difference between a control, a control arm and a placebo, though thank you for offering to explain. I believe, however, that I have provided sufficient sources to support the claim that there was no control group (synonymous with "control arm") in the study, as listed earlier in the discussion on my talk page. I can add one of these to the article, but more than that would be overkill. YorkshireLad (talk) 09:54, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I'm not sure what you mean. I don't see the sources on your talk page. Could you post them here? There was a control group in the study. Here is an example: https://www.sciencemag.org/news/2016/08/young-blood-antiaging-trial-raises-questions. "Each person will serve as their own control". Ambrosia's clinical trial was prospective, multi-center, open label, with a control. There are clinical trials without control groups, for example environmental or longitudinal studies.210.6.209.89 (talk) 10:03, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Sure: Quartz: "The results are extremely preliminary; they not published in a peer-reviewed, and there was no control study." [1] The Guardian: "The scientific community has rolled its eyes at the “trial” element of Ambrosia. There is no control group" [2] In fact, I also linked to that Science article. Other people on this page can disagree with me if they wish, but I believe most people will understand "control group" to mean a distinct control group. Nevertheless, I have further clarified the sentence I edited. I don't intend to get involved with edits to other sections of the page, as I have nothing more to add that hasn't already been said. YorkshireLad (talk) 10:10, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] It is still not correct and the article says "control arm" not "control group". Here is the sentence we are discussing: "The clinical trial has no control arm and so is neither randomized nor blind." First, the trial ended successfully in 2018 so it should be in past tense. I am requesting that it be edited to have a neutral point of view. Perhaps, "the clinical trial was multicenter, nonrandomized, open label, single arm, and assessed biomarkers before and 1 month after treatment in each patient". The article, as it stands, is clearly biased and written from a non-neutral point of view.210.6.209.89 (talk) 10:21, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] "Control group" and "control arm" are synonyms: see, for instance [3], where they're given the exact same definition by the Society for Cardiovascular Angiography & Interventions. But anyway, that isn't the sentence I was discussing, so I apologise for the confusion: the only sentence in this article I have ever edited is the one in the "Young Blood Institute" section that reads "Like Ambrosia, the trial had no distinct control group from the treatment group". I'm keen to make sure my contributions are as accurate as possible, but I have never edited the rest of the article and I'm afraid I don't intend to start. YorkshireLad (talk) 10:27, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Let's simply be focused on the part that you are interested in editing. The sentence is: "Like Ambrosia, the trial had no distinct control group from the treatment group; it also charged the participants for entry, in this case $285,000 per person." There are three references listed: the Scientific American article, the Daily Beast Article, and clinicaltrials.gov listing for Ambrosia's clinical trial. Would you be open to removing the comparison with Ambrosia and then focus on describing the clinical trial, assuming that is your goal for the purpose of the sentence? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.209.89 (talk) 10:43, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] (edit conflict) I don't really have a goal other than making sure the sentence was accurate. To be more specific, I didn't write the original sentence myself; I added it back at one point (several days ago now!) when you removed it. Since you raised concerns that the sentence was ambiguous, and I had (technically) added it to Wikipedia, I have now edited it twice to reduce any possible ambiguity. Since I believe the sentence is now fully sourced, and since this isn't the sort of article I enjoy editing (I tend to edit pages about shopping centres…) I don't intend to edit this page further, though of course that edit request is here on the talk page for other people to action should they wish. YorkshireLad (talk) 10:51, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] That's not correct. The Scientific American article does not mention the Young Blood Institute.210.6.209.89 (talk) 11:02, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I'm not sure if you're intending to continue working on this, but Maharaj's clinical trial listing on clinicaltrials.gov says it is currently enrolling, so the tense of the sentence is incorrect. I think it would be best to remove the comparison with Ambrosia completely.210.6.209.89 (talk) 11:15, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] (edit conflict) Apologies, I was concentrating on the part about Ambrosia in that sentence; I didn't know you had concerns about the mention of the Young Blood Institute. You are right that that section relies heavily on the SciAm source that doesn't mention the Young Blood Institute at all; I am not sure what's happened there. I'm inclined to remove the entire section, but since you already have and it's been reverted, that would be contributing to an edit war. Bonadea, Roxy the dog, since you contributed to the discussion above I hope it's alright to ping you: what do you think? It seems lots of things claimed about the YBI are cited to that SciAm source that doesn't mention them, and it rather undermines the section. YorkshireLad (talk) 11:20, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] Edited commented above to correct typo in username. YorkshireLad (talk) 12:20, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I will await their responses.210.6.209.89 (talk) 14:15, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I don't mind being pinged by GF editors – it looks like there are two different institutes involved here, and a paragraph mentioning each of them might work. I am inclined towards removing the sub-headings for different companies altogether and simply have a brief para about the various commercial actors. I have no time to work on that right now, but there is no hurry and Roxy and others might have different opinions and input. --bonadea contributions talk 15:03, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] I would be glad to help if you all would allow it. I could draft sentences or sections. As I've mentioned, the Young Blood Institute does not offer young blood transfusions, they offer plasma exchange. Perhaps their section could be moved to a wikipedia page on plasma exchange. 210.6.209.89 (talk) 15:15, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] @210.6.209.89: You have still not answered whether you have a conflict of interest. It's a simple question, yes or no, don't wait for the translation. --Mr. Vernon (talk) 15:40, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] User has been blocked from editing for a week, I guess we will just have to hold our breath and wait for his inevitable evasive answer. Greyjoy^talk 16:05, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] For the record, I would not be in favor of anything this user suggests - their evasion and requested edits make me think they have an agenda, it is not worthwhile listening to them trying to steer the article from factual to sympathetic for the quackery of young blood transfusion. --Mr. Vernon (talk) 16:37, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] ... and that is the second block they have received, this week. That's a poorer record than my own !! (I too welcome good faith pings. The one for me however didn't work, because a ping has to have an associated fresh sig to work.) worth knowing. -Roxy, the PROD. . wooF 16:53, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] @Roxy the dog: The first was for edit warring. Three guesses as to which page they were edit warring on. --Mr. Vernon (talk) 16:57, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply] @Roxy the dog: Ooh, thank you, I did not know that!  :-) @Mr. Vernon: The editor definitely seems to have an agenda; however, I have to (somewhat reluctantly) admit that they're right that the section on the YBI mostly isn't on the YBI at all. If nobody has any objection, I might fix that (though it is not really my priority either—as I said to the IP editor, this isn't really a topic I enjoy editing, and I only got involved by being on WP:RCP). YorkshireLad (talk) 17:31, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Young Blood Institute section

As I suggested above, I've tried to fix the YBI section. It seems that what's happened is that the author Daily Beast source [4] got confused, describing the YBI while linking to (and attributing a claim to) the SciAm source [5]—which, if you actually read it, doesn't mention the YBI or the people involved with it at all. All the other sources in that section are then daisy-chained along from the people mentioned in SciAm, so that actually none of that section related to the YBI.

I've split the section in two: one describing the trial referenced in SciAm, and the other a (very short) section on the YBI. I'm not convinced the new "Maharaj/Faloon trial" section is particularly NPOV (I didn't change the wording, other than to remove references to the YBI); as far as I can tell, the facts check out, but it reads as if someone's trying too hard to connect the people involved to shady goings-on unrelated to blood transfusion. Anyway, I'll leave that for someone else to fix, should they wish. YorkshireLad (talk) 00:57, 7 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, I would like to assist with editing this page. How do I do so? AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 13:20, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

AE3yia1AJeQ, the page is no longer protected (which it was until two days ago), so you can just be bold and edit it. However, you should be aware that content on Wikipedia needs to be written from a neutral point of view and be backed up by reliable sources. YorkshireLad (talk) 13:50, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

What if I make an edit and then someone reverts it? AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 13:51, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I'm going to make an edit. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AE3yia1AJeQ (talk • contribs) 14:02, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I made the edit. Looking forward to helping improve this article. AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 14:18, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

My edit was reverted and the explanation on my talk page says it was because of a blank edit summary. What should I do now? AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 14:36, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The explanation on your talk page does not say that, it mentions the usefulness of edit summaries, but of course no edit would be reverted for that reason, it would be absurd to do that. The edit you made removed sourced content, added incorrect claims, and changed the article to become less neutral, with no valid reason given (not surprisingly, as there could not be any valid reason to do that). The reason the article had to be protected was the way that people representing Ambrosia kept trying to remove content and twist the text to become a promotion piece for Ambrosia. Don't do that, please. Thank you. --bonadea contributions talk 14:41, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Bonadea, I cannot message you because your talk page is protected. Should I reply to you here? I would like to improve this article. As it is currently written, it contains errors and is not written from a neutral point of view. AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 14:44, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Bonadea, your message said: "I noticed that you recently removed content from Young blood transfusion without adequately explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an accurate edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry; the removed content has been restored." I did not solely remove content, I also edited and added content. Is that copy/pasted? It is not correct in this situation. AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 14:47, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is the place to discuss the article, not my user talk page. As your changes added errors and changed neutral text into non-neutral text, it might be better if you focused your editing efforts elsewhere. Thank you.

I am interested in correcting and improving this article. You reverted my edit. What do we do now? AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Please stop pinging me. I will probably see any messages you write here. --bonadea contributions talk 14:48, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. Your message suggested messaging you on your talk page. I am open to discussing here. We disagree. What do we do now? AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 15:10, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

 Administrator note AE3yia1AJeQ, please stop sidestepping the conversation by pointing to Bonadea's protected talk page — it is of no relevance to anything here (I am the protecting admin, as it happens). Conducting the discussion here more than suffices. That is what you do. El_C 15:15, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

El_C I mentioned it only because Bonadea asked me to message him on his talk page. Am I allowed to post here? I would like to understand how to correct and improve wikipedia. Bonadea and ThatMontrealIP have reverted my edits and ThatMontrealIP has warned that he may block me for disruptive editing. I'm not being disruptive. AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 15:20, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's just how the {{uw-delete1}} template is automatically written out as. You may safely ignore that part of it at this point. Stick to article talk pages only, for now, as you are very close to being blocked for using Wikipedia for advertising purposes. El_C 15:25, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Returning to the original topic - AE made a bold edit. It was reverted. A discussion ensued here. A consensus should be attempted here before any more edits are made to the article. Personally, I STRONGLY (yes capitalized) disagree with the edit by AE as an attempt to remove valid criticism of the "Young Blood"'s utter lack of scientific evidence. Strong medical claims require strong evidence. Instead, there is no valid evidence whatsoever. WP:MEDRS applies. David notMD (talk) 15:29, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Don't block me. I am editing only the talk pages to engage in discussion. As I have said, there is one peer-reviewed article by Alkahest, so you are wrong about that. AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 15:40, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Is the Alkahest article up to the standards of WP:MEDRS? -Roxy, the PROD. . wooF 15:47, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. Here it is: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/30383097 AE3yia1AJeQ (talk) 15:50, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

18 patients? --Mr. Vernon (talk) 15:58, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I don't believe you have read WP:MEDRS or have not understood it. Please look again and then answer my question honestly. -Roxy, the PROD. . wooF 16:03, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Roxy the dog, AE3yia1AJeQ has been banned, so don't wait up for a response. Mr. Vernon (talk) 16:05, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thx Mr. V. -Roxy, the PROD. . wooF 16:07, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

For that one publication, not only was it an uncontrolled clinical trial (not WP:MEDRS), but it reported no measures of mental function, only extent of adverse events. David notMD (talk) 18:02, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I like to imagine we would have got there, eventually !! -Roxy, the PROD. . wooF 18:48, 13 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The subtitle's use of "Pseudoscientific" seems non-NPOV

I'm not a frequent editor so I wanted to start a discussion rather than just making a potentially contentious change myself: From the body of the article it seems like there's not sufficient consensus in the cited sources to claim either that this is pseudoscience or that it's a useful treatment in humans.

Maybe a more neutral term would be something like "proposed", "unvalidated", "unproven", "experimental", "conjectured", or "theoretical"?

Also: sorry if "subtitle" is the wrong term here; I'm not actually sure what to call that piece of the article structure! If there's somewhere obvious I should have looked for "what are the parts of a Wikipedia article called", I would welcome corrections. Matthewavant (talk) 13:57, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I completely agree with your statement. I have changed the "Pseudoscientific therapy" subheading to "Experimental therapy". You're correct that it would be more precise to say that young blood transfusion for anti-aging effects has not been proven effective in humans, rather than labeling it outright as pseudoscience. This more accurately reflects the current state of scientific knowledge on the topic.

The term "pseudoscience" implies a fundamental lack of scientific methodology or plausibility, which may be too strong a characterization in this case. There is some legitimate scientific interest in the potential effects of blood-borne factors on aging, stemming from animal studies. However, the effectiveness and safety of young blood transfusions for anti-aging in humans remain unproven because the appropriate clinical trials have not been done. Azim58 (talk) 18:47, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]