Talk:Satoru Gojo

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Nominator: EternalBaile (talk · contribs) 07:58, 7 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Z. Patterson (talk · contribs) 02:46, 27 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing the article. Z. Patterson (talk) 02:46, 27 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Copyright violations appear to be unlikely, but a source for Polygon has highly similar wording to these sentences. The following sentences should be paraphrased or directly quoted. The contents of the chapter surprised fans so much that they took to social media to react to the new development. At time of publication, the "#GojoSatoru" hashtag was trending on X with more than 11,400 posts. See here. Z. Patterson (talk) 02:51, 27 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I have some points to address.
  • The phrase who suffers a curse of Rika teaches him in the lead looks awkward. Is there a better way to reword or correct the punctuation in the following sentence?
    • He was first introduced in Akutami's short series Tokyo Metropolitan Curse Technical School as the mentor of the cursed teenager Yuta Okkotsu, who suffers a curse of Rika teaches him at Tokyo Prefectural Jujutsu High School.
  • Information in the infobox should align with information in the article and its lead. The appearances of the weapons in the infobox without describing them in the article's prose appears to be WP:FANCRUFT.
  • I would be careful with using sources such as Collider, Comic Book Resources, and Game Rant, as Valnet has a reputation of "content farming" with this sites. Please see WP:VALNET. According to that guide, any Comic Book Resources source after 2016 is not reliable, but there are users on this site who say that anything after mid-2023 on Comic Book Resources is not reliable. If you choose to keep Game Rant, Game Rant needs to have a space in the citations.
  • "While" is a word to be cautious about. I would change instances of "while". See MOS:WTW.
  • I do not believe the website name in this citation is correct. "Yuichi Nakamura Struggles with Portraying Satoru Gojo in "Jujutsu Kaisen": Calms Voice Tone from "Hidden Inventory / Premature Death" to "Shibuya Incident"". Mensnonno. September 20, 2023. Archived from the original on February 6, 2025. Retrieved May 21, 2024. It should be "Yuichi Nakamura Struggles with Portraying Satoru Gojo in "Jujutsu Kaisen": Calms Voice Tone from "Hidden Inventory / Premature Death" to "Shibuya Incident"". Japan Anime News. September 20, 2023. Archived from the original on February 6, 2025. Retrieved May 21, 2024.
  • The following sentence looks awkward and needs to be fixed. For the anime's second season Nakamura claims he suffered struggles in properly portraying Gojo due to the two story arcs depicting the same character with different quirks and personality as a result of his age; While people do not change their voices too much over a decade, Nakamura aimed to make Gojo different in the two story arcs from season 2.
  • Was Memes Random a reliable source? I understand that the page is an interview, but when I go to the archived page, it looks like a blog created with a WordPress theme, GeneratePress.
  • Remove the full stop from the image caption Cosplayers of Satoru Gojo as depicted in Hidden Inventory arc. It is a sentence fragment.
  • This is a sentence fragment: A sorcerer working as a teacher at Tokyo Prefectural Jujutsu High School. Expand the sentence, or change the full stop into a comma.
  • Do you have sources for the first and last paragraphs in the Jujutsu Kaisen subsection? I see sources in the second paragraph, but not the first or third.
  • Is Study Break a reliable source? The author of the Study Break article appears to be either a student of Yale University or someone who works there, but the website does not specify the author's title other than "Author at Study Breaks". I would think things written by students would be given similar treatment to WP:SCHOLARSHIP.
  • Remove the full stop from the image caption Tribute to Satoru Gojo in Universidad de Chile station of Santiago Metro. It is a sentence fragment.
  • Titles of publications, including periodicals and news websites, should be italicized.
  • I do not see see "meme came to life" as an exact quote in the Hindustan Times article cited. The quote should be "meme [came] to life".
Otherwise, the article looks like it meets the WP:GACR. If you make the changes or otherwise address them, I plan to pass the article. Z. Patterson (talk) 03:55, 27 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The changes were not made within the seven-day period set by WP:GAN/I#N4. I am closing this review. Z. Patterson (talk) 21:44, 4 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.