Talk:Immanuel Nobel

Peer review: Immanuel Nobel

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Well structured and informative article that reads well. I have tightened up some phrases for flow and in some cases, idiom. The article begs the question: who was this in relation to the Nobel of the Nobel peace prize? (I know the answer, but you haven't stated it and it's one that is likely to be on many readers' minds.)

There's scope for rather more citations. Don't leave unattributed claims lying open but rather, support them with high quality references. Sometimes we could do with knowing rather more about the areas that you probe into, personalities, business operations and so on - I'll stop short of being directive. Overall, the promising core of something that with a reasonable amount of work, could end up reaching its full potential. Astral highway (talk) 23:32, 14 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your feedback and cleaning up some of the article I very much appreciate it Otto (talk) 00:40, 15 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve it however I don't know if what I have done is good and I need some ideas on improving it

Thank you, Otto (talk) 13:50, 14 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]