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Nominator: DigitalIceAge (talk · contribs) 06:16, 24 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Joereddington (talk · contribs) 17:15, 1 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This reads really really well. There are some things to pick on, but not much.

First thoughts:

  • "Epson MX-100, a wide-format version of the MX-100" has completely confused me. Typo?
  • " In addition, the MX-80's firmware ROM takes count of the length of each line printed as well as the position of the printhead on the paper in order to calculate exactly how much and in what direction the printhead needs to move to reach the start (or end) of the next line. This logical bidirectional printing increases throughput further.[16] " I don't have the source but that reads super strange to me with my computing hat on. Why not just reset to 'left margin'? Why would you start at the end?
    • It's hard to explain in a nutshell, but if a line of text is equal in length to the last, you would technically want to start at the end of that line instead of resetting to the left margin in order to shave time off printing. This video demonstrates this in practice. I'll try to polish up that paragraph in the future to make it more comprehensible. DigitalIceAge (talk) 19:23, 1 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • It would be cool if we had a Graftrax picture.
  • Missing alt-text - it's not a GA requirement so... but it's important to me so I'd like you to think about it...

GA review

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Okay, let's review.

Criterion Status Notes
1a. Well-written Pass

The article is clearly written, jargon is either avoided or explained (possibly to a fault), and the structure is easy to follow.

1b. Comprehensive Pass

Coverage is broad and appropriate for the topic: development history, specifications, Graftrax, variants, sales/reception, and legacy are all addressed with good depth. I don’t see any major missing aspects that a reasonable reader would expect. The Graftrax and IBM 5152 material is particularly nice. I'd be interested to know if there is a hacking community around it of some sort.

2a. Verifiable, with no original research Pass

All significant claims appear to be backed by reliable sources (books, trade magazines, historical overviews). Short-footnote style is used consistently. One small thing to watch is explicit citation placement for “first disposable, user-serviceable printhead” – the supporting citation could be placed at the end of that sentence rather than only on the following one – but the source does exist and is already in use.

2b. No original research Pass

The article summarises published sources and does not appear to synthesise them in a way that adds new analytical claims. Historical and technical details all trace back to named sources. I would have been able to do a more in-depth review if I had access to the sources but hey.

3. Broad in its coverage Pass

The article covers the major aspects: company background; context in printer history; technical design and capabilities; upgrades; variants; commercial performance; and longer-term legacy. There are no obvious undue gaps or overemphasis.

4. Neutral point of view Pass

The tone is generally neutral and attributions are clear (e.g. Veit calling it a “landmark”). A few enthusiastic adjectives (e.g. "massive commercial success", "meteoric growth") could be slightly toned down or more explicitly tied to sources, but overall the article reads as balanced, not promotional.

5. Stable Pass

No evidence of edit warring or ongoing content disputes. Seems like one editor from the beginning and a year of marinating.

6a. Illustrated, if possible, by images Pass

The article is well illustrated. If you had access to an MX-80 I'd be amused by a sample of the printing itself.

6b. Images are relevant, copyright-compliant, and have appropriate captions Pass

Images are relevant and captions are generally clear. One caption in the gallery (“Epson MX-100, a wide-format version of the MX-100”) has a small wording slip (it should read “wide-format version of the MX-80”), but this is a trivial, easily fixed issue.

Result: On balance, the article meets the Good Article criteria. I'd like you to have a swing at the comments at the top (captions, alt-text, the wording around the print-head moving to the start of line, but as it stands it passes the criteria.

Did you know nomination

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Epson MX-80
Epson MX-80
  • ... that the Epson MX-80 (pictured) became the predominant de facto standard for dot matrix printers?
Improved to Good Article status by DigitalIceAge (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 85 past nominations.

DigitalIceAge (talk) 23:08, 1 December 2025 (UTC).[reply]