Talk:Episode 4778

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July 15, 2025Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 7, 2025.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that an episode of the British soap opera EastEnders encouraged LGBTQ+ men to come out?

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Nominator: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 13:12, 29 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: ImaginesTigers (talk · contribs) 17:33, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hi, DaniloDaysOfOurLives. I will review this for you. Although I currently have a nomination open, I am hoping to get feedback from an FAC regular so you don't need to treat this as QPQ request. I'm sort of familiar with the show through cultural osmosis but have never watched the show, so I'll be giving you a very distant perspective. As there aren't many references, I will fully review the article's sources.

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Prose

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Lead

Plot

  • being punched by Nancy early when she assumed -> earlier
  • heart to heart seems a bit informal British - maybe "heartfelt conversation" or "open and honest conversation"? something like that
  • When Lucy and Peter find their father -> Was he lost? Where did he get found?
  • Kat and Alfie are told that the pregnancy is fine and they find out that they are having twins, which shocks him The construction here (Kat and Alfie; they; him) feels unnatural. Is Alfie the only one that's shocked? If so I think we should repeat his name. It just reads strangely to me

Production

  • Not really feedback so much as a question – do the BBC really spoil the events of the entire episode before it's released? Or was this unusual? — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • The writer also noted that whilst Mick was supportive of Johnny, they were not sure of how Linda would respond to her son coming out as gay – I think I'm missing out on some wider context here, but this appears to be marketing material. I was a bit confused at first because I thought "the writer" meant the writer of the show. I can see that it's assigned to the show's marketing team (EastEnder News Team), but I just wonder whether it's appropriate to include blog commentary – do they really wonder this? If they work on the show, wouldn't they know? This is an ecosystem I'm just not familiar with so if this hasn't been an issue for your past EE GAs then I won't throw a fit over it — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • The rest of the material in this paragraph feels fine to me. It's just the one above that seems strange. The actor speculating on what it might mean for the future of the show seems appropriate to me – just including a BBC promotional team seems strange because they're not an impartial source speculating on it — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think the prose here is well written, but structurally, it feels odd that it went back in time. We start with the show airing; then discuss some spoilers released previously; then get the defence of the coming out storyline; then recap what happened in the previous episode. — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Going to the last paragraph – it happens again where we jump to pre-release spoilers at the very end for a separate storyline. I think it would feel tidier if there were sub-headings that moved chronologically. — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    • I completely understand your point. I have had this dilemma when writing this episode articles and others. However, all in all I try to group the paragraphs thematically to try to make it flow better. If I did the spoilers first and then the real world info, it could confuse readers and they would have to reference back. Furthermore, the spoilers often tie in well with the real world info (e.g. it was reported that Kat would go to the hospital, but the twins were a surprise etc). DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 20:46, 15 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
      I've had another look and I can see the challenge. I can't think of a way that restructures it without basically rewriting the entire thing, which would be an unreasonable demand of prose that already meets the criteria. I can let this one go — ImaginesTigers (talk) 20:57, 15 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

  • Strike said Strike and Dyer received letters, which he was proud of
  • Dyer separately said he received letters, which he was proud of
  • Lucy said viewers had been in touch, which he was proud of

Sources

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Realising now that there are not 25 references. There are 25 sources. Based on this, I'm going to review 15 from Production and 10 from Reception. If there are no issues, I will consider the source check a pass on good faith.
The concerns I raised about the BBC Blog's inclusion above technically belong in this section. So please feel free to respond to those here. — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • [1]–[3]: These technically don't pass because they were posted before the show aired. That said, I can imagine the impossible task of identifying a source that says "Yes it released at the time the BBC said it would" for a show that airs every night, so we can IAR this one.
  • [4] – Pass
  • [2][3] – Pass
  • [2] - Pass
  • [2] - Pass
  • [5] - Pass
  • [6] – Pass
  • [7][5] – Pass. All this drama over days-old characters! Would I be right in saying they were added so that EastEnders could have a coming out storyline? Do you think there would be any sourcing to this effect? — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    • They were not introduced soley for this purpose but there is some info in the source I used for reception ([1]) which talks about the newness of the family affecting the scenes. I have not found any sources confirming that the family were introduced for this reason, but as they were the extended family of established characters and the owners of the pub (which is a huge setting in the soap) I doubt it. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 20:46, 15 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
      Understood — ImaginesTigers (talk) 20:59, 15 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • [8] - "Kindness agenda" is cute – were there no gay characters previous to the introduction of this family? — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • [4] - Technically this calls it the "gay romance" storyline. [10] - part of a storyline that saw Johnny come out to his father Mick} – [11] – Pass
    Not at all – I was checking each reference in turn to validate "coming out storyline", but the first source (probably the lowest quality of the three) rather terribly calls it the "gay romance" storyline. No need for you to change anything, I was just writing the result of each check when I did. (Even if all three of them said "gay romance storyline", I would not ask you to change it.) — ImaginesTigers (talk) 21:00, 15 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • [12][6] - pass
  • [13] - pass

Reception

I've reviewed 26 total refs now with 1 minor issue so I'm fine to call this a sourcing pass. Only real open queston is about the BBC Blog. — ImaginesTigers (talk) 18:31, 14 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for responding. With those changes made, and the promo source excised from reception, I'll pass the review. Congrats, and thanks again for the generous pledge — ImaginesTigers (talk) 21:04, 15 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Miminity talk 14:36, 29 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Improved to Good Article status by DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 26 past nominations.

DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 01:34, 16 July 2025 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
QPQ: Done.
Overall:

Discussion on naming convention for articles on unnamed TV episodes

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There is a discussion underway at Wikipedia talk:Naming conventions (television)#Titling episode articles without titles that would affect how articles like this one are named.--Srleffler (talk) 22:22, 26 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds like an interesting debate. I will check it out. Moondragon21 (talk) 08:59, 7 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]