Talk:2023 Macau Formula 4 Race

2023 Macau Formula 4 Race has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 25, 2025. (Reviewed version).

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GA review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2023 Macau Formula 4 Race/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: EnthusiastWorld37 (talk · contribs) 20:23, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 16:22, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review! Arconning (talk) 16:22, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@EnthusiastWorld37 Preliminary comment before I start with the full review, the article heavily utilizes information from Citation 19 which uses BiliBili. Similar to YouTube, a lot of the content is user-generated and from a cursory glance the source doesn't look reliable and is a blog post made by a fan. Could you give some remarks regarding this source? Arconning (talk) 12:45, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I used the source because I was under the belief the author was an expert in this field. However, I've had another inspection of the site and the author of the source in question and I have decided to replace it EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 16:54, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@EnthusiastWorld37 Here are my comments. Arconning (talk) 05:01, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Have made amendments to the article based on the review. Let me know if I have missed anything or if there is the need for further amendments. EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 07:34, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Prose and MoS

Lead

• "The 2023 Macau Formula 4 Race, formerly the 2023 Macau Asia Formula 4,", I might be coy but did the name of the event get changed midway? Or before its inauguration it was named the latter then named the former during the actual competition.
• I feel like it'd be noteworthy to include some tidbits that Lindblad had the fastest laps for some of the competition.

Background and entry list

• No issues.

Practice and qualifying

• "2:30.922 17 minutes", there's a comma missing here.
• "Beeton had earlier struck the Fisherman's Bend corner wall, thus practice ended early with eight minutes left.", a semicolon could be used to substitute the comma as they can be read as independent clauses.
• "by an support race incident.", "by a support race incident."

Qualifying race

• No issues.

Final race

• Mentions of "spilled oil" should be "spilt oil"

Media

• Image used in the article has appropriate licensing and is relevant to the article. Proper captions as well, all good.

Refs

• Earwig's alright.
• Ref checks: 1, 3, 6, 12, 16, 21. All good.

Misc.

• No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral enough. All good here.

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.