Draft talk:Luca Formentini

Notability and sourcing improvements for resubmission

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Notability and sourcing statement

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This resubmission addresses prior notability concerns under WP:NMUSIC and WP:GNG. The draft now cites multiple independent, reliable English-language sources with significant coverage:

  • Stars’ End – in-depth reviews of *Subterraneans*, *For Sundays When It Rains*, and *Cloud Ornament*.
  • Psychedelic Baby Magazine – review of *Intra-* (2021).
  • ChainedLK – detailed review of *Cloud Ornament* (2024).
  • AllMusic – genre and style overview.
  • Palate Press – feature article connecting Formentini’s music and winemaking.
  • KLOF Magazine – feature on *I Am Ghosts* (2024).

Tone has been neutralized: all evaluative statements are attributed to published sources. Self-citations and Wikipedia references have been removed. Discography has been fact-checked via Discogs for release data.

Per WP:NMUSIC, the subject has significant coverage in multiple independent, reliable sources. This draft should now meet inclusion criteria. Silvia Dalle Montagne (talk) 00:15, 12 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Request for review – fixed filter issue and updated sources

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Hello,

This draft was previously auto-declined by the filter due to a Wikipedia self-citation and an external link formatting issue. Both have now been fixed.

Removed all Wikipedia-as-a-source citations Converted “Dark Companion Records” to a proper <ref> Added multiple independent reliable sources (Stars’ End, Psychedelic Baby, ChainedLK, AllMusic, Palate Press, KLOF) Neutralized tone and verified discography via Discogs Meets WP:NMUSIC and WP:GNG Requesting human review at your earliest convenience.

Thank you! Silvia Dalle Montagne (talk) 00:35, 12 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]