Draft talk:ClearMotion

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Promotional language

Parts of this article at this stage have sections that are embellished with overly promotional language. I understand that it is difficult to avoid in the available sources as they are quite Press Release-y, so their unverified claims can be introduced with 'Clearmotion says [claim]' or "according to Clearmotion, [claim]" to avoid presenting them as factual.

Also, avoid/remove corporate speak such as "... rebranded to ClearMotion in 2017 to reflect its broader vision of transforming vehicle dynamics through software and mechatronics" and "The integration of comfort and functionality positions ClearMotion's systems as essential components in the development of autonomous vehicles designed for passenger productivity". Needlesballoon (talk) 05:52, 11 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]